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~fire And Ice~

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there tou go :icontiredplz: WTF HOW DID THIS TAKE SO LONG. YoU bEtTeR eNjOy. or die
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Personally, I just came up by this ,and I really like it. There are only a few things I would honestly add in or out, and otherwise, I think this is a great art. Motivated me to draw some dragons, too.

First, I'd like to say I really, really like the design of the dragon, because it is obvious you put some pressure in it. You know, the scales, horns, tail, wings... It's really creative. I also need to compliment the rather unique colors of the dragon.

Also, I'd like to compliment the pose and idea behind this artwork, that makes it seem like the dragon is in fact going trough some smoke and struggling hard to keep on going. It makes it look like there is some plot going on there, and that's what I really appreciate in art.

Moving on, now I need to state what I think isn't quite correct.
First, it seems like you haven't really had a steady hand while drawing this, probably due to drawing with cursor. That isn't much of a flaw, I only think it would look much better if the lines were thinner and more straight on certain places.
Also, I'm not sure if the built was ought to look like that, even if I admit I like it. Front legs look a bit too canine for a reptilian creature, and they could be a bit thinner and crooked in my opinion.
Also, I always prefer seeing some backgrounds, they mean a lot to the art itself. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/n/n…" width="15" height="15" alt=":nod:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="334" title="Nod"/>

I hope you like my critique, and don't mind my honesty! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>